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I kind of like this one..
Old 05-25-2004, 05:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I went to a place called Baileys Bluff. It's some place in Tarpon Springs FL. The model knew of this place and it was a nice place to shoot. I like the way Jessica the model looks next to the green plants. I wish it was shot in the morning but we made the best of it.

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Re: I kind of like this one..
Old 05-25-2004, 07:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Well the green part didn't come out very well, so perhaps you need to play with the color balance. Also the model seems a bit angry as she is almost glaring at the camera. The lighting is a bit harsh. Perhaps a bit of softening in Photoshop could help this. The way she is posed tends to make her look heavy. If the hip is arched a bit, you can reduce the appearance of extra weight (also have the model pull in her tummy right before the shot. There are no catch lights in the eyes. A reflector could have helped here and/or fill flash.
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Re: I kind of like this one..
Old 05-25-2004, 08:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The grass is not green ? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]
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Re: I kind of like this one..
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What are you asking? You said you liked it due to the green plants, but they came out very yellowish in the photo. Who said anything about grass?
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Due to the time of day you did the shoot, the sun has desaturated the green plant life and given it a low contrast and yellow hue. The high angle of the sun has also cast many hotspots on her chest (and what I find most distracting) the tip of her nose. Although I see a reflection in her eyes, it isn't strong enough to draw my eyes to it. As RF Smith mentioned, a reflector could have helped you out.

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