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Old 05-24-2004, 10:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is my very first post. I had a great time with these shots. Please let me know what you think. Tim


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Old 05-25-2004, 02:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like them but would like to see some eye contact. Can we see more?
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Jim, Thanks for the reply! I'll work on getting some more up soon.

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I assume that she's in front of a surfboard. If so, I would have liked to have seen more interplay between the model and the board. The first pose is very nice. Shooting outdoors would have been chill, but may not have been possible. The second pose would have been better if she had been glancing up so her eyes are seen. The lighting is confused in both pictures so they have too much of a snap-shot feel. But the pictures show the beginnings of good things to come between you two.
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Yeah, it's a little confusing at first I guess, actually the pictures were taken in front of a surf board that was mounted on the wall. Thanks for the critique.
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