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MY FIRST SHOOT EVER!
Old 05-16-2004, 10:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I just completed my first shoot with a model. I had a great time, and the model (Monica Parsons) was a real pleasure to work with. I did the shoot to gather material for a catalog mock up that I am laying out, and I would really like to hear what you all think of the shots, and what advice or critiques you have for me!
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Re: MY FIRST SHOOT EVER!
Old 05-18-2004, 02:35 AM   #2 (permalink)
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The shadows seem very dark....I like the second pose best. You may want to try submitting larger images for review. I run my monitor at 1920x1200 so they are too small for me. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Re: MY FIRST SHOOT EVER!
Old 05-18-2004, 08:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah, I was kind of going for darker shadows, which may be bringing me closer to an artistic nude shot rather than a glamour shot. I have other photos from the shoot that are more balanced, but i was attracted to these. That of course may be my own lack of experience. Thanks for your reply!
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Re: MY FIRST SHOOT EVER!
Old 05-18-2004, 08:38 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Okay, the extent of my photographing the human form is limited to family portraits for friends & relatives; however, I've seen my fair share of on-line content, and I do have a few comments. First off, I have a little problem about the whole shadow thing. If it's not dark enough, it just seems to gather in the minor imperfections or natural folds of the skin. The model is clearly beautiful, and I would never fault her features, but it didn't seem like it was dark enough to have the effect that it seemed you wanted. My only critique of the model is that she looked bored. Other than that, I think that the intention was good and you're on the right track.

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