Welcome to Garage Glamour. I'm sure you'll find a diverse group of people here that enjoy photographing beautiful women for a living and a hobby and like helping each other get better in the process. I believe that there are at least three other news photographers here as well. I couldn't see the picture you posted so.....
I went to your web site and looked at all your galleries and found the Studio and Portrait Gallery to be your weakest link. There are only two images there--The Woman in the Field (over saturated), and The Little Girl on Ladder--that are up to your standards.
Each of your other galleries have imges that are outstanding. I only wish they were bigger. They're beautiful. Hang around Garage Glamour for a while and look at some of the portfolios (if you haven't already), study the lighting techniques and ask for tips. Your other work puts you 10 steps ahead of someone just starting out because you already have an eye for the light.
PS. An easy way to post a picture--click on "Portfolio" in the "Instant UBB Code" box and select an image from your GG portfolio.