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Another photo for your opinion
Old 05-12-2004, 10:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Thanks everyone for your feedback on my first photo. Here's another which does not exhibit the low lighting the first had on one side. Do you think it's too bright?




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Re: Another photo for your opinion
Old 05-12-2004, 10:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Steve,

I like this one. I like being able to see her face, and her expression is really nice. She has great lips. I love the curve of her body and the pose suggests she was trying to be modest but failed. LOL One thing that bothers me a tiny bit is the bit of pinched skin where her fingers meet her side. Relaxing her fingers along her body would relieve that tension. I like the bright white background. Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Another photo for your opinion
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Hi Barb,

Thanks again for your feedback. As observed by you the fingers do need to be more relaxed. I'll need to pay more attention to such details. Estrella, the model has seen your comments and is most appreciative of your kind words as well as suggestions. If you'd like to see more of her pictures please visit this link

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As always your frank opinion is most appreciated.

By the way I very much like all the photos you have included in your posts & replies.


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Re: Another photo for your opinion
Old 05-12-2004, 09:15 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice shot of a very pretty model. The twist of the neck puts a bit of a wrinkle in the neck. The color seems a tad reddish. I would prefer the whole head be in the shot, not just a tiny bit cropped out. Your copyright notice runs into the side of the model which is a bit distracting.



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Re: Another photo for your opinion
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Steven, I really like the image, the white background makes the model pop out at you, like the other comments, the fingers could have been relaxed, and the wrinkle in the neck is a little distracting, but not sure how you could prevent that and still get her head back that far. Keep up the excellent work.
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Hi Bruce,

Your observations are most appreciated.Thanks

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I keep your pointers in mind. Thanks for taking the time and your feedback

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Steve,

First, thanks for the nice compliments. I took a peek at the rest of the session via the link you provided and it looks like you and Estrella have a nice chemistry. Keep up the nice work and post often.

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