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Old 05-09-2004, 10:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Looking for constructive criticism
Old 05-09-2004, 11:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Amazing sunset - beautiful silhouette. Although not too sure of the poseing of the models - just doesn't work for me.
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I really like this one. I am not sure what it is exactly but something about it really grabbed me. Nice job.
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I love everything about it except the posing... Astonishing setup, though.
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Heres a better one...
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Re: Heres a better one...
Old 05-10-2004, 06:17 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I'm sorry but I do not believe that this is a "better one". The entire mood is ruined by the sailboat, even though I understand the patience in composition that it took to capture the image. I did not comment on the first image because most people seemed to hit on the posing and I agreed that it bothered me. If I was required to choose between the two I would have chosen the first over this one. What bothers me here is what is important? Is it the sunset or is it the models? They compete with each other they do not meld equally into one image and that is what bothers me.

I have not attempted an image like this so I have nothing to appropriately post. I like your work but for me you missed the bulls eye by a smidge on this one.




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First one is better
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I didn't care for the first one, but it is better than this one. The sailboat is totally out of place here and just breaks up the lines of the photo. The sunset and clouds are great, however. The models need to suck in their tummys a bit at the moment you shoot the photo. If you'd have them point their toes at the moment you shoot it will make the legs look better. As it is the legs look fat.
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What a BEAUTIFUL sunset and clouds! I don't like the models' pose at all--reminds me of, well... never mind.

Something that I think would have worked really well in this situation and lighting style is the models standing facing each other, very close, but not so close that there is no light between them. The tension of them being very close, in silhouette, in front of such an amazing sunset, well... I think it'd be cool. I wish I had an ocean to work with. LOL

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