Hi Ron -
I'm kind of sitting on the fence on this one.
I like her look; fresh, clean, healthy, not overdone...I have to say that I'm not a big fan of the slicked back hair, but I think it works very well for her facial structure. She has beautiful and expressive eyes - I would work very hard to bring them out a bit more in that shot.
My ticks to the converse are that I can't tell if she's laying on her tummy, and looking up at the camera, or if she has shoulders like a linebacker. Trouble is, I don't know how I'd do it differently...Perhaps a wider crop? Just thinking out loud there...