Couple from yesterday (Multiple image)

[RSStory]

Model is Tiffany OMP#86174 Please let me know what you think?

[R_Fredrick_Smith]

Hi,
The first shot seem awkwardly posed and a subject hardly ever comes out well with the head tilted that way. It also seems to have a pinkish cast. Dress needs smoothing as it appears wrinkled. Cropping out the elbow and hand doesn't work well. The second shot is very nice. Good pose, very playful. I like the shot but cropping off the bottom of the foot lessens the effect. I suspect you cropped it off when you took the photo. Last shot is average, but a bit flat and lacks sufficient contrast, in my view. The head is nicely posed and this would have worked better as the head pose for the first shot.
Cheers,
rfs

[geowulf]

Ha ha ha.. Sorry, for the chuckle.. when you said "couple" I kept scrolling down looking for the second model in the shot.

Anyway, Great job.


Greg

I think the photos can use some more contrast.