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Old 04-20-2004, 01:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Crimson & blonde
Old 04-20-2004, 02:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Quick question, what is the intended purpose of the photo?
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Re: Crimson & blonde
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The original intended purpose was to supply the woman modeling for the pictures with photographs for her own use. But also to practice with lighting in a studio situation for myself and another photographer at the time. I am still trying to do more photo shoots with the intent to improve on lighting, shadows and compostion. Getting voluteers to model for these things isn't always an easy thing for me to do in this area.
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Re: Crimson & blonde
Old 04-20-2004, 07:37 PM   #4 (permalink)
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The exposure is a little off in my view. A bit too bright. Nice pose. Image is too small. I think you should shoot for about 500 to 550 pixels high for this venue so we can get a better look at details. For example, I can't really tell if their are catch lights in her eyes.
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Re: Crimson & blonde
Old 04-20-2004, 10:18 PM   #5 (permalink)
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My guess is that he is limited by GG basic subscription .

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Old 04-20-2004, 10:23 PM   #6 (permalink)
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One way to know for sure whether or not you nailed the exposure is to do a facemask histogram in Photoshop. Select the models face, just under her chin and slightly into her hairline, including most of her face, excluding clothing, and then hit CTRL L and see whatcha got. Nice looking woman you have there. Post more.

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Re: Crimson & blonde
Old 04-20-2004, 10:55 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Shoot, shoot, shoot. It is a little hot but that may be because of how it was scanned and made web ready. The model is attractive and I like the way the scarf parallels the line of the top. Work on 2:1, 3:1 ratios between main and fill lights. Then work on one light only to frame left or right your choice. Keep notes of what that does in your studio. All of us learn what our lights do in our box if you will. Shoot as often as you can and don't think it has to be someone as lovely as this. You need to know what your lights do on a human form. Any human form.

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