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Elizabeth (Multiple Image Post)
Old 04-13-2004, 05:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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These images of Elizabeth were taken on the grounds of an abandoned warehouse. Elizabeth is an exceptional model to work with. Any critques, advice or critcisms will be greatly appreciated.












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Re: Elizabeth (Multiple Image Post)
Old 04-13-2004, 06:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Elizabeth is very pretty! You did some great stuff with her! Here's my run down, and keep in mind it's just my opinion.

#1 - I love it! The pink and white pop from the blue, and I love the earrings! Lighting is really nice as well. I'd like to see it straighter if you know what I mean. It's tilted a tiny bit and you can see it when looking at the pole and the door.

#2 - The surroundings here are really cool! I love the pose as well, very much. I don't particularly care for the model's expression, though. She has a great body!

#3 - This one doesn't work much for me. Her expression is awkward, and her wrist is cut off. I like the window behind her as a backlight.

#4 - I like the pose, but don't care for the coloring, or the nightie because it doesn't go with her surroundings.

#5 - I love this one! Her skin is golden and she's got a cute look on her face. The trucks behind her add to the "cute girl at the truck stop" feeling.

#6 - Nice headshot. I think her skin looks a little blue/green? and I also think she needs a little bit of retouching, but otherwise, it's nice.

Good work, Eric. I really love #1 and #4. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Re: Elizabeth (Multiple Image Post)
Old 04-18-2004, 04:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
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What a very lovely model. I like #1

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Old 04-18-2004, 06:01 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Are these shots done with film and scanned on a slide scanner or flatbed? Just curious because of the drastic differences in skin tones from one image to the next. I have similar results with skin tones with my Nikon LS-2000 scanner. Just curious. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Re: Elizabeth (Multiple Image Post)
Old 04-18-2004, 06:06 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Love the location and color of #2
It looks like she has green skin on #4, colored wall near by?

 
 
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Mike: The images were shot on Fuji NPC 160 negative film, then scanned on a CanoScan 2710 film scanner. The lingerie image was shot in a shaded area which I believe caused the greenish blue tone. I PS'd it the best way I knew how. The others I used a 81a warming filter anyway in spite of maybe losing the effect of the filter during printing.

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Re: Elizabeth (Multiple Image Post)
Old 04-21-2004, 11:59 AM   #7 (permalink)
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You can easily adjust color balance/cast and exposure compenstation in Photshop quite easily, and see the results even before applying them to the picture. It's like having your own color printing machine (but digital instead).

If you have PS 7: Image -> Adjustments -> Variations. The rest is self explantory [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

I tired color correcting and toning down the brightness for pic #4 (the most excessive greenish / cyan cast out of all the pictures posted). Does this look better?
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Re: Elizabeth (Multiple Image Post)
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Eric

Nice work! As a long-time warehouse shooter myself, I have a couple of things that you might think about.

When moving from getting the technicals and the model right, you're going into telling a story. What story do your images tell??? Images 2 and 3 are the most "together" -- I like the belt, jeans and shoes.

If I were shooting in that environment, I'd go in one of three directions -- 1) fine art figure where you're contrasting the soft nude figure of the model with the harsh, broken down environment 2) compliment the environment with industrial fashion -- boots, leather, vinyl, heavier makeup, etc. 3) the contrast between high-end fashion and the broken-down environment -- model in a long, nice dress, hair up, makeup nice, etc with longer shots of the envirnment mixing in. Images 2 and 3 have elements of the last two suggestions.

Here's some samples of stuff I've done:

The nude:


Something more industrial:


Some casual fashion:


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