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Old 04-08-2004, 08:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I don't post here often, but I read the posts almost daily. Today I had the opportunity to shoot again with a fairly new model to the industry. Over the last several months I've shot her three times. This time she wanted to shoot some "Artsy" stuff. Here are just a couple, there's more on my profile.

Any suggestions how I might make the next shoot better?

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Old 04-09-2004, 11:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I don't consider the first one artsy as much as I think it is a great lingerie ad. I'm happy with it the way it is.

Number 2 would be more 'artsy' if she did not have the thong on. I'm not sure I like the position of her hands but it is a nice image. Something in a vertical format with that same lighting would be interesting.

Thanks for sharing.

Haven't shot any artsy lately so here's Steph.

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Old 04-09-2004, 11:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the suggestions. There was suppose to be a third image.

How this?

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I'd say the third image is the charm. If I were to pick nits, I'd like either a little more or a little less light at her feet, but I can't honestly say I'd have done any better! One of the best mirror surface shots I've seen...
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Old 04-09-2004, 07:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
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the first image... nice lighting...her right hand may look better pointed to the side, and the elbow may look better bent... and maybe brush her hair

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I think the third image is very good... maybe a little more light on the hair, and photoshop out the front edge line of the mirror.

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