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Yellow dreams
Old 03-22-2004, 07:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here is a new composite photo of model Liz ( portfolio ). I used PGE 5 from AutoFX for the composite part. Here is the photo:



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Re: Yellow dreams
Old 03-22-2004, 08:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I got to hand it to you to even try such a composite. I get close to doing one and always back off. That being said you can know that what I am about to say is purely an opinion not based upon skill at the task but an eye that tells my brain what I think.

The brushes are crisp and clear so they become the front plane. The model is not as sharp so she becomes the second plane. There is a gap between the edge of these vertical brushes and the diagonal model that bothers me. If the goal was to tie all the elements together the gap keeps them apart. I would draw her closer to the brushes if possible and actually sharpen her image, but then again that's just my opinion. I stand humbled at what you attempted, when I have not.

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