Greg
You have shown that you have an eye for beauty and the ability to attract a lovely model, key first steps.
#1 - I like it because it is as if you caught her in a moment. The strap carries me to her eyes. I would have preferred to see either a ittle more or none of her left eye, but that's just me.
#2 - I understand the challenges of on camera flash so no comment on the hotspots on the tile. Her pose is awkward to me but I suspect she is new to this. I would have cropped tighter.
#3 Great concept especially as we can see through the fabric and yet the white is not blown out. Here again I would have cropped tighter, but I still see it as your best.
Keep shootin' and thanks for being a part of GG.
Oh yeh an image.
Mike