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Old 05-21-2014, 09:43 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Molly b & w
Old 05-22-2014, 07:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome,
The sad fact is that this site is pretty much dead these days. You may have to wait before you get any useful comments. I'm sure some will also suggest that you post a larger image rather than direct someone to another site.
I like the way you've emphasized her eyes - but it seems to me to be at the expense of her face - the viewer's left side and her nose are so similar in tone as to have merged into a single, relatively light expense, and her eyes appear to exist on a flat surface. You show a lot of control of the process, but to me, the result is somewhat disconcerting.
Not trying to flame, just trying to give some feedback.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Molly b & w
Old 05-25-2014, 09:27 PM   #3 (permalink)
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My first thought was that I couldn't tell much from a thumbnail but then clicked on it to see it take me to another website. Good detail in the eyes but seems to be too much stray hairs on her shoulders that could have easily been fixed before shooting the image. Pretty decent black and white conversion as there are signs of both blacks and whites showing.
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Old 05-28-2014, 10:18 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Sorry about the small thumbnail and linking, I didn't take the time to figure out how to put the actual picture up.
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Sorry about the small thumbnail and linking, I didn't take the time to figure out how to put the actual picture up.
I use photobucket . com but there are other websites or ways to put images on here. flickr works also but usually have to modify the links they offer to make it work on here.

Here's an example. I added a space after and then before the [IMG] brackets so you could see what it looks like without the photo and then again without the space to show the photo.

[IMG] http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e2...0137_5x8bw.jpg [/IMG]

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