I like this. It's a simple shot but nice in my opinion.
Jesse, i am wondering, what do you use for flash units?
the reason I ask is, i wanted to suggest to you, using an off camera flash. Even a simple camera flash held in your hand and remotely triggered by your camera might give you some nice results.
If interested, maybe grab a set of these cheapos off ebay and play around with them.
As for what flash to get to go with these cheapo wireless, I will get back to you I am not current on whats popular at the moment. Been awhile since hitting up the strobist community.
Using a set just like the link above, i got this result, below, while using an old Minolta 4000AF flash attached to one of the receivers.