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Old 01-18-2011, 01:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Shot a days worth of agency models a few months ago. Here are a couple out takes. Comments welcome.



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Old 01-18-2011, 07:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Since you are so friendly and supportive on this site I will take a shot at this (of course please take with a grain of salt as I can barely get somethign that doesn't still look like a snap shot)

In the first shot, there are two things that I noticed right away; first is the sprig of hair sticking out the back of her head... being this is an out take you probably caught that in the other shots... the other is more of a question, her eyes have catch lights but they still feel dark due to the dark colour of her eyes... not sure if there is a way to deal with that?

I really like the DOF in the second... I really like how her chest and arm are softened... a look I really like in "artistic nudes". But her upperlip looks a little dark, not sure if it's a shadow or... well not trying to be disrespectful of the models... if you know what I mean.

Keep up the great work and someday soon I will post something for you to truly rip apart on me.
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Old 01-26-2011, 09:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice captures, at those moments in time you preserved reality, with photographic professionalisim
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Old 02-04-2011, 03:00 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hey MH, I always like how honest your images are. These two are no exception.

Normally I'm a big fan of shallow DOF, but in #2 I'm feeling like it's too shallow. The crop has her very high in the image, cutting off some of the top of her head that would have been in focus, in favor of a large area of her chest which is totally out of focus. Now, I'm definitely not complaining about including the chest in the image! To my eye the shallowness (is that a word?) disassociates her face from the rest of her.

In #1, you still have a very shallow DOF, but her left shoulder and torso are largely in focus, and only her right shoulder is out. Totally different story here - her head is associated with the rest of her. Nice. A little more light (maybe a closer bounce card) on her left cheek might be nice.
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Thanks for the comments guys, it's food for thought. I've been covered up on the job the last few weeks. I'll try to get back with a few more soon.
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Old 02-13-2011, 03:25 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I like the second one even with the out of focus body look.
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