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Old 01-11-2011, 08:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I shot these in a small dining room in my friends apartment. Room probably 15x15 haha and I used a lamp for lighting. Like I have said in my other posts so far I am very new and using what I can get my hands on to shoot and learn.





















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Re: These are some of my attemps at Glamour Shots
Old 01-11-2011, 08:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I really like #6 photo...
I think the white balance is a little off though and the blacks could stand to come up a bit just to hide some of the imperfections on the dress sleeve (maybe lint). But still a great composed and posed shot.
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Re: These are some of my attemps at Glamour Shots
Old 01-11-2011, 08:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I really like #6 photo...
I think the white balance is a little off though and the blacks could stand to come up a bit just to hide some of the imperfections on the dress sleeve (maybe lint). But still a great composed and posed shot.
Thanks like I said this was one of my first of 3 attempts at glamour shots and to still keep them a little different from what I usually see. I'll work on that though man.
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Re: These are some of my attemps at Glamour Shots
Old 01-12-2011, 08:15 AM   #4 (permalink)
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These are pretty cool. I really like the compositional design on them. 1 and 4 are a little disconcerning for me as the model doesn't really seem to be anchored to anything so she looks like she is just floating. Normally our eye tend to go to the element that is most unlike everything else in the photo. In those two, the dress is the thing that stands out most. If that is what your focus for the shoot was then you acomplished it. If the focus was to be the model, I think something lighter in color would have been better so that her skin tone was the most different element.

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Re: These are some of my attemps at Glamour Shots
Old 01-13-2011, 12:58 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for your input and I can work on that. I know what your talking about with the outfit and thats just how I edited them but what you said makes sense.

Is it always slow on here like this? It seems like everyone gets on here but no one talks, they just look and leave.
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I can't speak for anyone else, but I do monitor this site and interject occasionally. Sometimes it just takes someone to take the initiative to start posting regularly. I have a little more recent stuff that I am prepping for posting. Keep you eyes peeled for it.
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With the exception of #4 I like the composition, cropping a posing on these. The lighting seems flat with too many specular highlights. It's hard to pinpoint because I suspect these have had a lot of post processing. What are you lighting with? Are you using an on camera flash? If so the #1 thing you can do is get the flash off the camera.
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