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shakka 01-02-2011 11:53 PM

cc please
 
http://www.garageglamour.com/forums/...ture7449-a.jpg

mfharper 01-03-2011 06:08 AM

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The main problem I see here is the hand is amputated and the crop is too tight. Loosening the crop a little would have allowed the whole hand to show and put the eyes in a better position in the image. There is nothing wrong with cropping the head if you are doing it to follow the rule of thirds and put the eyes in the proper position. In this image it looks like her lips were the main object of the photo, but usually in a portrait you want to draw attention to the eyes. The lighting and pose look pretty good.
http://www.garageglamour.com/photopl...1_IMG_9828.jpg

shakka 01-03-2011 03:49 PM

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ok thanks good info

Boutdat 01-04-2011 07:32 AM

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Looking and learning...
I like the shot and listening to the feedback as the photographer here. Good stuff to know.

Wheel*E Industies 01-13-2011 01:08 AM

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Agree with the cropping but JUST IMO I like to see the face and eyes. If it were my shot I would have lit up the face just a little more. Not a huge fan of shadow on a portrait. Just my 2 cents :)

Mark_Oehler 01-13-2011 06:59 AM

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If I would to make another suggestion, it looks like the highlights on her are are really the brightest part of image and my eyes are drawn right to them, which probably isn't the intended focal point.

ErnieR 01-13-2011 10:15 AM

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the even 45 degree x 45 degree lighting on each side doesn't work with her hair style. Both lights are casting a shadow strait into the eye and making them look dark and dead. In this case I would have gone with one light high behind me and one light low right in front of me about a stop lower in power for fill.
Something like this is what I'm talking about... http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_yK8zCoipRh...h/allit312.jpg

if that doesn't load, it's the second photo on this page. http://ernierice.blogspot.com/2008_04_01_archive.html

Ernie

shakka 03-04-2011 06:37 PM

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Thanks for all the advise

MaPe4re 10-30-2011 09:22 PM

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The lighting and pose look pretty good.
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