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Old 11-10-2010, 01:19 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Here's another set. Again, still learning so any and all constructive criticism/critiques is welcome! Thanks!









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Number 2 is good and Number 3 has potential but is very much out of focus which is a shame because I really like the dicotomy of the red wine and the black and white image. A good effort.
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In the first picture, is she getting tired? Mirror works against you. Again item on floor. In the second and third, I don't think your doing your subject any favors with your focus. In number four the beach is too messy. I'm not sure about five.
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Number 2 is good and Number 3 has potential but is very much out of focus which is a shame because I really like the dicotomy of the red wine and the black and white image. A good effort.
Thanks for the input! Number 3 was just an "I want to try this" type in where I was trying to make the wine the focal point. All of these were done with an SB600 flash. Any suggestions, such as number 3, as to making "focal points" while just sitting around someone with a camera? Does that make any sense? :-)
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In the first picture, is she getting tired? Mirror works against you. Again item on floor. In the second and third, I don't think your doing your subject any favors with your focus. In number four the beach is too messy. I'm not sure about five.
Tired? She was probably getting tired of me snapping pictures :-) but yes, it does look like a yawn gone wild huh? I had hoped it would come across as a type of "girl gone wild - yell" and look somewhat sexy but I must agree, it looks somewhat like a yawn. Points well taken on the rest. Any ideas how to clean up those photos? Thanks for the input though!!
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