Yep. Unfortunately, my aperture choices to catch the window detail were limited, so I had to come in closer.
Actually, her right arm would not have looked quite so odd if I had rotated around to my right some to catch more of her left arm. The position of her arms is intentional, as is the expression on her face. This is meant to be more of an editorial-style shot than a glamour shot. The arms and facial expression are meant to give the picture some tension.
The model had a baby a month ago, by the way. I think she got back in pretty good shape, considering.
You guys are a tough crowd (which is why I get critique here). I put this up at photo.net and it is getting rave reviews. Your comments echo what I found wrong with the picture. I was pleased with the control of the exposure and the lines do exactly what I was hoping for.
Thanks for the input, it is very useful.