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Michelene Figure Shoot (Nude Content)
Old 06-15-2010, 08:51 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This is Michelen's second nude shoot. Let me know what you think, what would you have changed to improve the shot?

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Re: Michelene Figure Shoot (Nude Content)
Old 06-15-2010, 01:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like that dramatic lighting a lot. Nice image
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Old 06-15-2010, 01:54 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice image, the only thing missing is her right leg, somehow you need to get a little light on it, just so we know its there. To be really dramatic I would have only gone with the one side light and no fill, her outline would have really popped.
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Old 06-15-2010, 08:10 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Love the shot - always a fan of dramatic lighting. And I like the color, pose, and wardrobe - it all fits together in the mood of the image. Would a hint of a hair light taken away from the dramatic look? We can make out both her left and right sides, even in the darkness, but her dark hair disappears completely. Maybe a hair light on the same side as the key light, just back a bit so it wraps around and separates her hair, but doesn't light her back?

I like the shadow the robe strategically casts, even though it then masks the right leg. Did you bump up the right hand?

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Thanks guys, Jademan, I agree completely about the leg, now that you pointed it out to me it really bothers me. Brian, not the levels on the hand were not boosted. I think the reason it looks a little hot is the same reason the leg disappears. The fabric she is draped in actually goes all the way around her and is covering the leg all the way to the floor. I've got the levels pulled back enough that the fabric disappears, which makes the hand more apparent. I'll revisit this image and see it I can't improve on it a little.fficeffice" />>>
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Nice shot Mark...love it...
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