The physique is great! The expression is... well, the physique is great!
I do like some of the shots, and think there's strong potential here. The thing I'm not seeing in these photos is the "work". I see pics of a guy who looks good flexing with his shirt off. I don't see photos of a guy who is modeling. The blank expression in the shirt & tie set is the same blank expression is the "flexing my abs" set. Expression and posing take work. I get that we're making a go at posing here, but the expression compromises the look.
* much stronger eye connection with the camera
* work at building a range of expressions
* master the headshot - don't use the physique as a crutch
* shoot again soon and post a few
Thanks for posting, hope you stick around and get some helpful feedback from some of the real experts here.