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On The Farm...NSFW
Old 05-02-2010, 07:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Howdy,

I try to get out of the studio every now and then...Your thoughts ?

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Re: On The Farm...NSFW
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She might want to consider trading her night club boots for some western style boots for the first photo. I like the clouds in the background of this one.
The model looks a little over exposed on number 2 and 4. Not the entire picture, just the model and I'm not refering to her being exposed as in nude.
Composition looks good on each of them.

This is about the closest thing I have for a rule 10 picture.

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Old 05-09-2010, 06:55 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice work! Looks like it was fun to shoot.

#1: as above, different boots (and probably top) would fit better. The shorts are just right, although could use a bit more distressing so they didn't look so freshly cut off. I like the pose, the tree branches framing the top, and the composition in general.

#2: I like the sepia - it really works in this shot. I'd like to see how #2 and #3 look with the same treatment. As noted, the model might be a bit overexposed - some of the suds, especially on her left thigh, blend in with her skin. Pose, especially the expression, are terrific. I would have shopped out the schmutz on her foot - it's not enough to belong there, but enough to distract my eye. Overall my favorite of the lot.

#3: I like the pose and expression most in this shot. Her face is lit well, but her torso is a bit hot. I might have loosened the crop just a bit so her elbows weren't so close to the edge, and maybe show a bit more of the tub.

#4: This one was a close second for my favorite of the bunch. The model is terrific - everything about the pose is working together. I like the eyes closed for sure, although would have liked to see a variation of the shot with her fabulous eyes open and locked on the camera as well. With her eyes open this probably would been my favorite of the set by far. Same exposure comment. I'd be interested in Rolando's (and other's) thoughts on the crop. Her left shoulder and the top of her head are cut off a bit, which might get some negativity from the Man. In this case, though, I think the crop gives the image a tight feel and makes sense with why we can't see more on the bottom.

#5: I like the choice for b&w. Not sure why, but this one doesn't pop for me. Crop might be *too* tight on this one?

Thanks for posting, interested to read more critiques of the series.

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I like the idea of the boots in the first shot, the color is right even if the style isn't exactly western. I really like 2 and 3 BTW.


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Re: On The Farm...NSFW
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Hi Guys,

Thanks for the detailed replies.. What is rule 10 ?

I had no real indication the bubbles had blown out, and I know the treatment I used in Lightroom makes # 2 even worse...

The shorts could have been more frayed, but then they would have been called a bikini bottom !! hahah
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Hi Guys,

Thanks for the detailed replies.. What is rule 10 ?
Sort of have to look to find the rules, but they are found under "guidelines" in the main forum. The last sentence (about posting an image) is what they are referring to.
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10. When posting critiques, be firm, be professional, be polite--use tact. Distasteful, nasty, belittling posts will not be tolerated. The "Golden Rule" applies here, "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you." When critiquing, don't just provide problems, provide solutions and sound advice along with any references. Improvement comes from constructive criticism, not destructive criticism. When critiquing, or being critical of someone's work, you must post an IMAGE of your work as a courtesy to the person being critiqued..
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Hi Ben,

Thanks for that... I thought it must have been some set of rules for photography like the 'rule of thirds'.. hahhaahah
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