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My second photo shoot - critique please
Old 01-28-2010, 03:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi,

Below is an image from my second photo shoot with Michelle (my second photoshoot ever!) This actually took place in September last year but I've
only just got round to posting.

The image appears to have lost some sharpness around the model's face during resizing but I'd appreciate any feedback you guys can give me.





Model: Michelle Manzer http://www.michelle-modelling.co.uk

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Re: My second photo shoot - critique please
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Your overall exposure is good on your image and the separation between the subject and the background is nice. The biggest and most important problem I have is when I look at this image it hurts my eyes because it is so out of focus. It is interesting her lips seem to be slightly in focus but the eyes are not sharp at all.
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Re: My second photo shoot - critique please
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Some quick thoughts besides what is mentioned already about the separation of the background and soft eyes--don't center your subject! Especially when it's horizontal. Horizontal images are weaker than verticals. Use the rule of thirds! Here are some great tips, though they'll be updated with the revamping of GG, but especially the book excerpts, should help, http://www.garageglamour.com/forums/...p?pg=phototips Thanks and all the best, rg sends!
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Re: My second photo shoot - critique please
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Guys, thanks for the feedback. Totally agree with your comments and can see the flaws with my image (now you've pointed them out.)

Clearly need more practice...a good excuse to book another session with Michelle!

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