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Old 01-24-2010, 08:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Does the tilt kill this photo?


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Ok I had problems posting the photo I will upload to my port and then repost it
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Re: Please critique
Old 01-24-2010, 01:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Personally... the tilt messes with me just a little. My mind keeps jumping back and forth from "she's laying on the ground" to "no... she's leaning against a wall?"

I think the tilt was a good idea... but maybe a little less drastic? Either a little more "portrait" angle, or a little more standard. Either way it'd bring it back into line. That's just what I think anyway.
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Old 01-24-2010, 10:42 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I don't mind it at all.
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Old 01-25-2010, 09:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I don't really like the tilt.
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Old 01-25-2010, 11:10 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Not sure if she is standing up or laying down.
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Old 01-25-2010, 06:40 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks I'm going to see if I can straighten it up a bit. I really liked the shot but thought the angle might be too much
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Old 01-28-2010, 04:16 PM   #7 (permalink)
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The tilt doesn't bother me as much as the open look up the nostrils and the dark eyes.
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It doesn't add anything.
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No go on the tilt. Might have worked if there were more body in the shot.
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