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Old 11-29-2009, 10:59 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Hot Shequila
Old 11-29-2009, 02:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Maybe its the look you are going for, but I would like to see a bit more contrast on the first couple. Those are black leather pants right? In the 3rd picture I would like to see the whites of her eyes a lil more whiter. Otherwise your pictures, like always, look great.

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Old 11-29-2009, 04:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Maybe its the look you are going for, but I would like to see a bit more contrast on the first couple. Those are black leather pants right? In the 3rd picture I would like to see the whites of her eyes a lil more whiter. Otherwise your pictures, like always, look great.

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Her top is black and her pants are dark grey imitation leather. We've had discussions with some photographers on garage glamour in the past on some of the images posted where the whites of the eyes being too white looked fake. I left her eyes as they are except for removing some of the red.

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Old 11-29-2009, 05:19 PM   #4 (permalink)
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We've had discussions with some photographers on garage glamour in the past on some of the images posted where the whites of the eyes being too white looked fake.
Thanks for the heads up as I am sure my latest post will be thought of as too white then. I like seeing them really pop though.

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Re: Hot Shequila
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Really like image 3. The skin tone management is excellent, and the treatment of the area around the eyes. Also like the models pose and expression. Quality work on all of them just prefer the third image.
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Old 12-01-2009, 10:36 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Really like image 3. The skin tone management is excellent, and the treatment of the area around the eyes. Also like the models pose and expression. Quality work on all of them just prefer the third image.
Looks like you put a little extra thought into your critique.
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If I were to give myself a critique on my own images here, I would want to change her pose on the first one by showing more of her right arm and bring her chin up a little more with some tilt to one side or the other.
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I don't know, I think the chin down in 1 gives the message, mess with me and I will wrap this chain around your neck and tighten it until your head pops off. I suppose If your goal is to make the image less aggressive or soften models affect then lifting the chin and tilting the head might do that. Still a nice image. Have a great day.
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Old 12-02-2009, 10:52 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I don't know, I think the chin down in 1 gives the message, mess with me and I will wrap this chain around your neck and tighten it until your head pops off. I suppose If your goal is to make the image less aggressive or soften models affect then lifting the chin and tilting the head might do that. Still a nice image. Have a great day.
Shequila is just a part time diva and generally a nice person. Somehow the evil threatening she devil wasn't quite what I had in mind. She would probably laugh at both of our comments though.
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