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Blond beauty
Old 09-22-2009, 01:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Dutch student Nathaly (21).

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Re: Blond beauty
Old 09-22-2009, 03:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Numbers 2 and 3 ring the bell for me. On number 2 you could have cropped out some of the empty space to her right for a better effect and the same with number 4, you could have cropped out some of the empty space to her left but all in all good work.
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Re: Blond beauty
Old 09-22-2009, 04:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Maybe just a tad more space on the right on #4, but I do like the composition as it is, with all that space. The design on the door really works for this compositon, in my opinion.

White clothing is so dificult for me to do much with, outdoors, but the detail in the whites is great.

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Re: Blond beauty
Old 09-22-2009, 06:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I really like the negative space in # 2 & 4, but I think #3 is my favorite. Good Job.
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Re: Blond beauty
Old 09-22-2009, 07:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I really like #2, the back lighting of the sun on her hair but then having a nicely done fill flash is really nice.

The only change that I would have made to #3 is so have had a shallower depth of field, I think that would pull the eye even more towards her.

I didn't have any problem with your negative space.
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Re: Blond beauty
Old 09-24-2009, 04:17 AM   #6 (permalink)
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No. 2 and No. 3 are my favorites. They really work well.
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Re: Blond beauty
Old 09-24-2009, 05:26 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Excellent show...Fab job................
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Old 09-27-2009, 04:45 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Nice and sharp. I'm very fond of number 3...
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Old 11-18-2009, 12:45 PM   #9 (permalink)
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#3 is the best of the bunch.
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Re: Blond beauty
Old 11-23-2009, 08:21 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Well, I just don't get number 2. She looks apprehensive and the crop at the shoulder is pretty strange. I keep wondering what her hands are doing and why she is apprehensive.

The other shots are lovely, neat backgrounds. I like the first one the most.
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