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Still into the rurals-multi photos-6 of them
Old 09-13-2009, 02:26 AM   #1 (permalink)
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...Some additional photos frm the shooting few weeks ago within old buildings... all C&C are appreciated... I had non good commencts here in my country from some photographers I know, so I would like to know if it is true, which doesn't do any good to delete them...
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Re: Still into the rurals-multi photos-6 of them
Old 09-13-2009, 08:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Nothing wrong with these pictures some of the poses are a bit stiff but other then that i like em'

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Re: Still into the rurals-multi photos-6 of them
Old 09-13-2009, 11:23 AM   #3 (permalink)
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To just put a model in a space isn't enough. If the space has character, then it helps if the model in someway relates. Most studio shots are on a blank background so as not to compete with the model. Some will put a soft model on a hard background (nudes on rocks) to emphasize their differences. Others will use the same or contrasting designs in a similar way.

Here, I cannot make a connection between the model and the background. Her expressions are one of awareness of the photographer but not emotional involvement.

So my question becomes, "What are you trying to say with these pictures?"
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Re: Still into the rurals-multi photos-6 of them
Old 10-04-2009, 01:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I agree with the comments about the photos being stiff. The first one really bothers me with the dress hanging up like it is. Doesn't look real!

The other thing that bothers me is the footwear doesn't do anything for the model and interrupts the flow of the photo. I could see her in sandals or heels but the boots are too clunky for the dress in this scene.

Exposure is fine and I like most of the posing especially in the doorway or arch.

This is just my opinion and you may not agree!
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Re: Still into the rurals-multi photos-6 of them
Old 10-05-2009, 09:29 AM   #5 (permalink)
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As a photographer I would say you did very well but believe that her outfit could be improved on for this location.
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Re: Still into the rurals-multi photos-6 of them
Old 11-29-2009, 01:35 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I find the boots rather jarring.

They'd work with jeans, maybe even shorts, but a summery dress...

Maybe with different poses they'd work with the dress, but I doubt it.
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Re: Still into the rurals-multi photos-6 of them
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I LOVE the hole in the wall location. Bring her back with some different outfits and do a few more poses at that local. Though you should keep the poses from having the bar behind her go thru her head.

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