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Michelle - my first model
Old 07-11-2009, 05:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi everyone,

I'm new to photography and had my first ever shoot with a model a few weeks back. I chose an experienced model called Michelle...I thought it would help if at least one of us knew what we were doing!! Michelle was fantastic actually, very pleasant and easy to get on with.

Anyway, here's one of the pictures from that shoot. I'm reasonably proud of this one as a first attempt but would love to get some honest feedback from other GG members.

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P.S. I've moved this post here from the general forum as it's probably more relevant here.

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Re: Michelle - my first model
Old 07-12-2009, 12:22 AM   #2 (permalink)
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As a first time, I think you did well.

I'm not too fond of the way you composed/cropped this photo. I would of preferred to see more of a "portrait" 1.5 crop rather than the square you used. But I suspect that you did this only to hide the lower part of the original image.

If not, I may have removed the necklace. Also, the shadow cast by her earring on her neck, I may have removed that in post as I find it also distracting to the flow of her smooth skin.

But these are just my opinions as to what I may have done. Otherwise, I think you did a good job with your first model. I look forward to seeing your next model...
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Re: Michelle - my first model
Old 07-12-2009, 06:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hey Fletch,

Great first attempt. Overall I think you have done a pretty good job. Not much to add to the above comment. Those little things are what you start to notice as you go along.
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Old 07-29-2009, 10:27 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you both for your constructive feedback, much appreciated. Totally agree with your comments...something for me to bear in mind next time.

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Such a beautiful lady
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