New photos from May

[Zakd]

Hi..
not anything commercial or specially made for, but wanted to share these and would like to have some feedback or critiqies.....suggestions...any reply positive or negative..
regards Zak

[gr8shotz00]

All are good images. Clean and sharp. Good lighting.I struggle just a bit with some of the hand and arm positions. I know we all put our hands in these positions and it seems natural, but in the photos they give off a bit of an unnatural feel in the first and last. Perhaps in the first if we saw more of what she was doing that caused her hands to be like that would help. Like enough to see if she was dancing, fighting, horsing around. The Green striped shirt one is by far my favorite. The first black in white i like but the crop was to tight and we lost the top of her head.

[ARTFORMS]

I like all of these Zak. The hand positions on the last 3 are a bit unusual, almost as if you caught her between poses. The skin tones look good, they're sharp and well composed and I've seen plenty of magazines with the top of the head cropped and have some of my own that are this way.

Good job Zak.

[Zakd]

...thank you veru much for your reply... I appreciate it.
All of the photos are croped as I wanted, specially No.3 where she was originaly totaly into the frame but I thought that this crop is better and suits her look good.

considering the hands it is good said. I told her to dance, to move around so I catch her in some interesting expression instead of classical posing. that is why specially No.1 is that ike, she was dancing.....

thnks again for honest words....
regards Zak