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Alt / Punk Model Photo - Critique
Old 05-25-2009, 05:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Your thoughts please. I am new & I am trying to improve. If you have nothing positive to say then please say that, but I would prefer to hear more specific thoughts good or bad.



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Re: Alt / Punk Model Photo - Critique
Old 05-27-2009, 08:51 AM   #2 (permalink)
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feeling these, all the parts are working together.

well done.

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Re: Alt / Punk Model Photo - Critique
Old 05-27-2009, 09:39 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I think the first would benefit from a closer crop, if it's about the model. Even if not, lose the light vertical line (reflection off steel bar) to viewer's left.
Second - model's face seems not so sharp? Maybe my fuzzy eyes.
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Re: Alt / Punk Model Photo - Critique
Old 05-28-2009, 01:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Totally agree about the light vertical line in the first image ...it's gone in my new crop (will post soon).

The second image is in focus, but hasn't been high-passed to make them pop like the first image has. ...also it's a tough 50/50 on the crop for the second image. When I crop out the red chain link fence entirely on the left the image does become 100% model centric (a good thing), but as a photographer I am in love with the marriage of the model and the wide use of darkening negative space... (damn you vanity, thy name is me. I should crop it, but I don't have to like it)

Thanks again for all the insight and your time in giving it.

P.S. Chunglee & jford, I thought I'd just let you know I appreciate you two for commenting on all of my threads and giving me your thoughts.
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Re: Alt / Punk Model Photo - Critique
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They are both nice images. Like the color and the lines.

In the first one, the model's hand position bothers me. Almost looks like she's missing a thumb.

I agree with the other that the eyes in the second image look soft, like maybe you focused on the girder in the center of the image.

Models looks good and it seems to work.
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