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Some new work, C&C please
Old 05-17-2009, 09:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A model and friend of mine introduced me to TracyAnn. A few images from our first photo shoot. C&C please.





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Re: Some new work, C&C please
Old 05-18-2009, 08:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Very pretty girl. I like #3 the best. It looks like your using on camera flash for fill. If at all possible I would suggest trying to get the flash off the camera.


Here's one of Chapelle done outdoors. Only this was done with a reflector instead of flash, because my flash died one the 3rd shot of the day.
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Re: Some new work, C&C please
Old 05-18-2009, 03:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yes, I did use my on camera flash, the location we shot didn't allow Stobes for shoots (so I've been told).
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Re: Some new work, C&C please
Old 05-20-2009, 09:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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IMHO..#3 I like...as mentioned try and get your flash off camera and it will make a dramatic difference...
Good work....let's see more...
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Re: Some new work, C&C please
Old 05-27-2009, 08:48 AM   #5 (permalink)
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you should work with this model some more. she has potential and she has more to offer to the camera. i think the middle pic is your weakest due to cropping. the cropping isn't as spot on as the other two.

would love to see more.

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Re: Some new work, C&C please
Old 05-27-2009, 09:01 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I would agree with all the comments ... get your flash off your camera. Also, ease up on the eye whitening ... on my monitor they look unrealistic. Otherwise, keep working with that model.
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Old 05-27-2009, 08:14 PM   #7 (permalink)
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IMHO..#3 I like...as mentioned try and get your flash off camera and it will make a dramatic difference...
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bill,

you should work with this model some more. she has potential and she has more to offer to the camera. i think the middle pic is your weakest due to cropping. the cropping isn't as spot on as the other two.

would love to see more.

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I would agree with all the comments ... get your flash off your camera. Also, ease up on the eye whitening ... on my monitor they look unrealistic. Otherwise, keep working with that model.
Thanks for your comments. I'll keep working on my eye whitening technique.
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Old 05-27-2009, 08:51 PM   #8 (permalink)
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the first set has a lot more energy. you are missing intensity.

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