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Old 04-28-2009, 11:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I've been working on some B&W fine art stuff. Let me know what you thing of this. How can I improve?
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Re: Crystal (nude)
Old 04-29-2009, 01:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I am not a pro, but I would have to say I wouldn't change a thing. I like it! I think you did a great job.
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Re: Crystal (nude)
Old 04-29-2009, 01:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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You may not be a pro, but you have some nice work in your port. Thanks for the nice comments.
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Re: Crystal (nude)
Old 04-30-2009, 05:21 PM   #4 (permalink)
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This is wonderful indeed.
This kind of quality is what i want to be able to produce.
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Re: Crystal (nude)
Old 04-30-2009, 06:13 PM   #5 (permalink)
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This is wonderful indeed.
This kind of quality is what i want to be able to produce.
Thank you very much. And you can produce images like this. We were all Justa Nwebie at one time or another.
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Re: Crystal (nude)
Old 05-04-2009, 02:45 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Fine art nude is all about line, shape and this image has great lines. The diagonal of her body leading to her face is perfect.

Only nitpic would be the necklace. In FAN you mostly avoid jewelery.
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Re: Crystal (nude)
Old 05-06-2009, 02:19 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Having viewed much Fine Art photography over the years I think I've finally figured it out....

Shoot in B&W
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make sure it's out of focus!

Looks like you are halfway there!
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Old 05-06-2009, 07:26 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Having viewed much Fine Art photography over the years I think I've finally figured it out....

Shoot in B&W
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make sure it's out of focus!

Looks like you are halfway there!
Yeah, I'll have to watch that focus next time. You think if I focus on the nipples instead of the eyes it might work better?
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Re: Crystal (nude)
Old 05-07-2009, 09:09 PM   #9 (permalink)
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**Nice capture...as noted, the necklace may be aaahh ...other than that...it a gorgeous photo...
Good job.
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Old 05-29-2009, 03:37 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Howdy,

No expert here, but having tried similar myself I can appreciate what you have done here, very nice shot. If I had to nit pick, the skin under the left breast and going across seems a little blown...

I think I agree about the necklace, though never thought about it myself before either.

Well done
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