To begin with, I like the pose and the model.
Not a pro here so take it for what its worth. The first thing I notice is the lighting. She needs a little more light as her face and hair seem to be the darkest in the image. Add some light, or use a reflector to bounce some light up.
What are you using for lights?
I also notice some color casts. The face has a yellow/green cast, arms are red and the legs have a nice tan. May just be her complexion, could be my monitor, just what I'm seeing.
And following the rules, an image of mine.
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