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Old 03-15-2009, 01:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: In the field
Old 03-15-2009, 04:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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#1. the stray weeds draw my eye away from her face

#2, I like the pose, could have used a touch of fill in her face. Looks just a tad dark.

#3. I think this would be my favorite. Nice pose, good lighting, maybe a touch hot on her chest, lovely eyes.

Just my $0.02

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Old 03-15-2009, 06:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Great shots. I love the DOF (I believe it is called bokah?) She really stands out from the background, her eyes are sharp but like DeanP already mentioned, the light is a little hot in number 3.
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Old 03-15-2009, 09:04 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice shots, especially the last one. I agree with all the comments you've recieved so far, but would add one more comment and a tip. The comment is that the bent over position bothers me and doesn't look graceful. In the shots below, the models are kneeling down to make the grass look taller. The tip is -- try to get more foreground in your shots. Here are a few images I took last summer -- they're not perfect, but notice how the foregrounds adds to the depth of each shot (in my opinion) Hope you'll continue shooting with this beautiful model until you're "outstanding in your field!" LOL


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In the shots below, the models are kneeling down to make the grass look taller. The tip is -- try to get more foreground in your shots.
Great tip... makes a world of difference in the composition
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believe it or not, the rule of thirds actually works. Decide if its a landscape shot or a portrait shot if its landscape you need to show more landscape let the model stand about a third of the way from one edge and face across the frame. If its a portrait, keep in mind where someones eye will be drawn.

the third photo is too hot. but the best pose. The other two might possibly be re-cropped into great photos.

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