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A friend stopped by for some headshots
Old 02-15-2009, 01:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This is my first photo post. Looking for a review and some cc please.
I haven't been at this very long and I'm sure I can learn a lot here.
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Re: A friend stopped by for some headshots
Old 02-15-2009, 02:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Not a bad crop for a head shot. But your main light is too far to the models right. Your not getting enough light into her eyes. Without a catch light her eyes look sort of dead.
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Re: A friend stopped by for some headshots
Old 02-15-2009, 11:49 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for you comment. Agreed. The main light was actually on the left, with a some fill coming from the right. This was her first time in front of the camera and I keep reminding her which way to look. Unfortunately she was looking the wrong way in this one, but I really liked the little smirk she gave. I've thought about adding some catchlights in post.
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