Originally Posted by Brennans_Photography
Yes, she may be waiting for you, but, I'm waiting for you to give me some feedback on this shot, if you fell so inclined!
ALL feedback is appreciated, good or bad!
First great expression, exposure and skin tone. Adding an orange gelled light behind and to her left (camera right) would have tied the lamp to her and given her hair some separation.
Not a small girl, so needs some attention to her waist area. Perhaps a bit of a twist to make it nip in. Normally I would have moved her elbow away from the waist to see the nipping in. It looks like hers doesn't nip in so much. So I would have added a small sheer robe cover up, falling off the shoulders and brought her hand down the door jamb. Tie it loosely at the waist to create some "v" and this would cover the slight texture at her right hip.