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Old 02-05-2009, 10:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Yes, she may be waiting for you, but, I'm waiting for you to give me some feedback on this shot, if you fell so inclined!

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I think that it might have been better to do something else with her left arm besides have it leading out of the picture to what ever she might be leaning on and a little hair light might be good too. The colors work well together.
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Agreement one the left arm. For me it's more of the rose stem length. It is very dominating. However, love her eyes and the tilt of the head.
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Sorry, one more thing, if the bedroom lighting was a little dimmer I believe it would be much more inviting photograph. Still nice job.
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Old 03-14-2009, 12:40 PM   #5 (permalink)
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First great expression, exposure and skin tone. Adding an orange gelled light behind and to her left (camera right) would have tied the lamp to her and given her hair some separation.

Not a small girl, so needs some attention to her waist area. Perhaps a bit of a twist to make it nip in. Normally I would have moved her elbow away from the waist to see the nipping in. It looks like hers doesn't nip in so much. So I would have added a small sheer robe cover up, falling off the shoulders and brought her hand down the door jamb. Tie it loosely at the waist to create some "v" and this would cover the slight texture at her right hip.
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Defnitely would like to have seen some back or side lighting on this image to separate her a bit from the background.

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