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JEANS AND BOOTS--MY WIFE
Old 01-21-2009, 11:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Canon 20D with Canon EF 28-105mm 3.5-4.5 II USM lens at 35mm, 1/160 second at f4.0, ISO 100. Camera mounted Cannon Speedlite 420EX with Gary Fong Lightsphere II (without top) bounced off the ceiling. Vivitar 285HV on a light stand to camera right with a “homemade beautydish.” Slight adjustments with Canon Digital Photo Professional and Adobe Photoshop Elements 3. Any and all critique from those that in the know is welcome.
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Re: JEANS AND BOOTS--MY WIFE
Old 01-21-2009, 01:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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seems a touch under exposed to me, no real shadow detail.
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Re: JEANS AND BOOTS--MY WIFE
Old 01-22-2009, 01:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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This is a nice photo of an obviously very charming subject. I would h ave raised my viewpoint slightly to get her to open her eyes more widely. She could also tilt her head more directly toward you to allow her to open her eyes more. I agree with the first responder that she may be somewhat underexposed. But, if you like the exposure, I would add an accent to her midsection to breakup the solid mass of blackness. A lighter colored belt or chain could serve that purpose.
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