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thoughts please?
Old 01-12-2009, 04:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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ANY advice is appreciated.


First pic taken with konica minolta Alpha sweet (5D)




This one taken with nikon D70
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Re: thoughts please?
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I believe the second one has impact and interesting compositoin. Toning down the very light areas, and adding some contrast might take this to another level.

I can see it as a square print, 20x20 hanging in an office.

The first seems to lack any focal point, even though you have a shallow depth of field, the area that is out of focus is so bright that I keep looking there.
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