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My 1st Model Shoot of 2009
Old 01-12-2009, 01:51 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This model is a young woman who is looking to advance her career as a fashion model vs. a glamour career. So I understand if these images are a bit out of place in these forums, but I would enjoy hearing some of your constructive critiques. Hope everyone is staying warm.











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Re: My 1st Model Shoot of 2009
Old 01-12-2009, 03:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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First photo looks good. Model is beautiful but in some photos nose needs a little makeup. Hair light a little strong in second photo and too hot on left arm in third photo. I still really like the first one and feel the others have a lot of merit
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Re: My 1st Model Shoot of 2009
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Just a little contrast and darkening would do wonders for these images I believe.
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Re: My 1st Model Shoot of 2009
Old 01-12-2009, 03:50 PM   #4 (permalink)
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This model is not giving you anything. No emotion...just standing there.

If she wants to be a fashion model, she needs to learn to act out the part she will be playing.

it is in the eyes, the facial expressions, the way she uses her hands, the body language and reaction you get from seeing her.

All I see here is a girl standing in front of the camera.

Tell her to work on playing a part.

Remember, every pretty girl can't be a model, and every model is not pretty.

The photos look nice, but as someone else posted, they could use a little more POP.
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