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Old 12-03-2008, 11:28 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Took this one of my wife over the weekend. Looking for c&c so I can improve.

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Re: Relaxing
Old 12-03-2008, 05:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I'm not a big fan of the wrinkled sheet backdrops. If you are limited in your choices you could move her farther away from the backdrop and allow it to go darker. Also the additional distance plus a wide aperture for a shallow depth of field will allow the backdrop to fall out of focus and minimize the wrinkles. Your lighting also seems kind of flat. What are you using to light with?
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Re: Relaxing
Old 12-04-2008, 04:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with he wrinkled sheets. Ironing or steamig them will help (I know).

Also, it looks like the white balance is incorrect.

I think a flat surface for her to lay on would have been nice.

All in all, isn't it great to have a wife who will put up with your hobby?

Thanks for sharing.

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