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Old 11-27-2008, 11:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here is a recent shot of Lindsey. I'm looking for some feedback to help me get better. I know I cut off her right foot and that's a big no-no, but other than that, what else should I have done to make this a better shot?

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Re: Lindsey
Old 11-28-2008, 04:22 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it. And to me the missing foot doesnt really bother me given the pose. If anything the left leg is a little bright but still a nice shot.


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Re: Lindsey
Old 12-01-2008, 03:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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A little dodging and burning is needed so that her leg isn't brighter than her face. Also if you have a second light available it would have been good to set it as a rim for her hair and the back of the chair. This would add more "dimension" to the shot. Even a properly placed reflector would have done the trick. You just need a little separation when you've got black on black.

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Old 12-01-2008, 09:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Another thing is if her left leg was straightened a bit, it would look thinner.
I do agree its a good shot. Next time try it with a higher camera angle.

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