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A new attempt!
Old 11-11-2008, 12:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello again from Athens!Friday,i took this picture in auto show of Athens.The woman is a model,and worked in Opel's stand.She asked me to take a few photos.What is your point of view for shoot and the retouch?I used photoshop,gausian blur and mask.Thank you for your time.

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Re: A new attempt!
Old 11-11-2008, 03:46 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Pretty girl, but there are a few things I don't like about the image.

It would make a nice headshot if cropped, but the clothing is all looking rather untidy.

Your blur in postprocessing needs more work. I am seeing a halo effect around the model, and obvious blurring of her hair.

The lighting is rather flat, but that is probably to be expected in this situation, and to be honest I don't mind that at all. As I said, it would make a nice headshot but needs some work I think.

All are just my own, very subjective opinions of course.

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Re: A new attempt!
Old 11-11-2008, 12:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you for constructives comments.
The clothing is untidy becouse the model worked and was about 5 hours beside a car!The shot was not in a studio.Was in a exhibition and the lights was there no for the woman model but for the car!

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Re: A new attempt!
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I think your focus was off as well, the jacket pocket seems to be the sharpest area,
make sure you lock onto the eyes!! I prefer using a focal point thats closest to the eyes rather than the focus recompose technique.
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