Pretty girl, but there are a few things I don't like about the image.
It would make a nice headshot if cropped, but the clothing is all looking rather untidy.
Your blur in postprocessing needs more work. I am seeing a halo effect around the model, and obvious blurring of her hair.
The lighting is rather flat, but that is probably to be expected in this situation, and to be honest I don't mind that at all. As I said, it would make a nice headshot but needs some work I think.
All are just my own, very subjective opinions of course.
Do we still have a rule 10 about posting images when we give a critique?
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