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Old 09-19-2008, 08:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I haven't posted in a while, so here is a shot from last night. Let me know what you think:

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Re: Guardian Angel
Old 09-19-2008, 10:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the idea, but I think there should be more optimum cleanliness in the shot as it is a heavenly body. So I would recommend smoothing the skin, removing the moles and the mottling on the legs. I would also smooth the shorts.

I would also remove the bra, as it doesn't contribute to the image or her modesty.

A few more bounce cards to clean up the guns lines would be good especially for the one camera right.

Clean up the background, there appear to be scanning artifacts to camera left and a blemish camera right.
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Old 09-19-2008, 10:45 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Any Better? I am not that great with PS, so this is the best I could do.

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Re: Guardian Angel
Old 09-19-2008, 02:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Cool nice Glocks....
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Any Better? I am not that great with PS, so this is the best I could do.

Don't worry there are a great many of us (including me) that don't have great image editing skills. now with that said I think this edition is an improvement over the first. Keep shooting!

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Old 09-20-2008, 07:45 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Cool nice Glocks....
STEYR PISTOL M-A1 9mm

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Re: Guardian Angel
Old 09-21-2008, 09:33 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Excellent concept, the second version is almost there!
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Re: Guardian Angel
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Ok I'm a gun freak and hate to see gun safety rules violated. Please have all models keep fingers off trigers. I know they aren't loaded but those are the ones that 'accidentally' kill people. Other than that I love the pic
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