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Old 09-18-2008, 07:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I know what I think could be improved with these images. I would like the opinion of those whose work I admire and respect—members here. These were shot in a local park in the early evening. I used a Vivitar 285HV shot into a silver umbrella. A gold reflector was used for some (I cannot remember which). I used manual mode, took a few test shots and adjusted accordingly by viewing the histogram. All critique is welcomed.





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Old 09-18-2008, 11:40 AM   #2 (permalink)
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She's a very pretty girl. Images are both under exposed 1 not as bad as 2 though. The main light on 1 is too far to camera left. Pull it to the right a little and it could stand to be a little higher too. Nice start though. Keep posting.
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Old 09-25-2008, 04:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The first one is a great portrait!
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Old 09-25-2008, 11:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Very pretty girl. The ratio between the backlight in #1 and #3 and the rest of the image is a bit wide.
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Old 09-26-2008, 12:25 AM   #5 (permalink)
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A Vivitar flash into an umbrella just wouldn't be enough light to adequately balance the sun that you had that day but the first one is still looking pretty good considering your conditions. Had you been in complete shade your light would have gotten better results.

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