I agree with you... we ( photographers, working on our glamour skills ), post our work on this web site in hopes of getting some feedback by others with more advanced skills in the glamour photography field. When I joined Garage Glamour several years ago these boards were very active. For reasons I don't want to go into here I was unable to photograph anything for the last two years. But I'm back in business now and I too am very disapointed by the lack of responses to our posts. I must admit I too am guilty of not responding as much as I should. But I will coment on as many photos as I can now.
I'm not a pro, like you, I'm here to learn. In my opinion.
I like the idea and composition. I'm not sure why but the back looks too blown out, and lacks detail.
Hope this helps. Don't forget Photography is your art. You create what you like. It's YOUR creation. it's what YOU invision in your mind. If some one liks it fine if not oh well, thats fine too. What matters most is ,are you happy with it.