For what my opinion is worth, in general I like the photograph. It is unfortunate you have not recieved more comments as of yet
. What overwhelmingly strikes me most about your photograph is your crop. I think it is wonderfully done, and rescues the original photo. I also am impressed with the back drop and how well it has photographed. Your eyes might be a bit soft. I'm least receptive of your skin tones. I am not a skin tone wizard myself, and my monitor is due for a calibration, but her abdomen seems to have a green hue and her chest and upper extremities seems a bit red.
I again applaud your crop and hope you find my thoughts useful.
Re: Thoughts, please.