"I've removed the colored layer and re-posted the image."
Glad to learn that, because I stared at the first image for several minutes trying to find the color - thought my eyes had totally crapped out.
Even in complete b/w, I think the lighter lower left corner and the lips in the upper right compete for the viewers' attention. While the texture of the water droplets in intriguing, I think you'd have a stronger image by cropping somewhat below the ends of the loose strands of hair on the right.
Thanks for sharing.
"Keeping shooting will do more for the excellence of your photography than most any camera will!" JimmyD, PGS Extraordinaire.