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C/C Please - Annie from a recent shoot.
Old 04-28-2008, 07:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: C/C Please - Annie from a recent shoot.
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She looks a little orange on my calibrated monitor but if you like it that warm then that's cool (no pun intended). The main thing I notice is that she is running straight across the frame. Turning the camera enough to cause her body to lie (lay? duh) diagonally across the frame would make the composition more dynamic. You may catch a little flak for cutting the top of her head from some of the guys but I have no problem with it. To me the tighter crops feel more intimate.

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I like it. It may be a touch warm but I don't think majorly overdone. Do agree with the composition suggestion of choosing diagonals when appropriate. Also, I might sharpen the eyes just a bit. I like the soft overall feel but the eyes could be sharper without hurting the feel of the image.

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Re: C/C Please - Annie from a recent shoot.
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I will begin paying much more attention to diagonal composition. Why I can't remember to do it in the camera I don't know.
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