On the contrary! I think it's an excellent photo. You have a beautiful model, your composition is well done, and a perfect backdrop. I particularly like the pose and your angle of view. From my perspective, a glamour photograph in addition to being a quality photograph should evoke emotion. You've hit the nail on the head with this one my friend. Yes, it might be a bit warm for some tastes, but still a terrific photo never-the less. Might crop out that right foot . Some simple adjustments in photoshop and you'll have a great photograph.
I would consider a high number of hits as a positive sign. The lack of comments is sometimes par for the course as I have discovered myself. Not sure why? Perhaps it's an inner circle thing or perhaps critiquer's intimidation.
I don't know.
Would like to see more of your stuff. Will be on the look out. For the little it's worth, I'll offer my opinion. Be aware though, I'm not a professional photographer. I'm just a guy with a a camera that likes pretty girls.
Very Nice, David